The piece I’d like to revise is a short poem I wrote just for fun in the extra time I had. My poem is about how summer vacation should have lasted longer than it did. My idea came from when I found out there was only 1 week of summer vacation left until school. I think I could change my poem so that I rhymed and shorten the lines that are too long.
SUMMER VACATION COMING TO AN END
I had 1 week until school
It was horrible
Why does school have to start in August?
Why can’t it start after Labor Day?
These questions run through my head
I thought maybe I could say I had a certain disease
Maybe one where I have allergies to the school
I don’t know just something to get me out of school
So that I could have a longer summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming to an end
I blame the school district
Summer vacation should last longer
Not be shortened
Why does summer vacation seem to fly by?
Is it just me or do you feel it to?
Summer vacation is moving really fast
I just wish it would stop
Or maybe just slow down
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